Author: Brandon

Style Guide 4 Sentence structure and flow in Harmonia scene 1 and The Violin scene 3.   A lower order writing concern deals with the sentence level, specific content of a piece of writing. One could isolate this sentence or paragraph from the rest of the story and modify it, as the lower order concern Read More …

Often adventure movies have changes in intensity from one scene to the next. In Group 4’s adventure story, the final scene had two of these changes which we will call “beat changes”. The first beat change occurred when Becca and James broke the horror movie film that their mother was watching, which allowed the kids Read More …