Summarize essay: So my essay was about the first monologue in the batman 2022 film. The initial monologue to me personifies the idea of vengeance as batman. That is what he represents. While writing the essay I took a deep dive as to why this is the reason and found a couple sources and one from a Emory psychologist who breaks down batman’s psychology as to why he is vengeance.
Strengths: I think one of my strengths was the evidence I provided. Some from a professional and also some from the original source material. I believe these two pieces of evidence was suffice to back my argument.
What parts were hard to write And Guidance: I believe after I made my point in my argument by providing claim and the evidence I was a bit lost, Like I broke the text down and explained how the rhetoric and language was used, and gave other supporting details for my arguments but I do not know if that was enough or correct. I definitely need guidance to transitions.
I definitely struggled with transitions I would say, I am biased because it is my writing and I am more or less use to writing research papers so I feel my transitions were okay. But definitely one of my weaknesses.