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Awesome start, Courtney. You’ve done well setting out a clear audience and have made some really clear appeals to them by including both a professor and old-timey eye witnesses. I like, too, how you include most of the information through first-person accounts. I’m curious whether you could play up the “big picture” significance in the intro or conclusion–give us more on why this is such an interesting crime. How can you ramp up the stakes so your listener is optimally engaged?